may i feel said he
by e.e.cummings
may i feel said he 让我感受你好吗?
i'll squeal said she 我会叫的 她说
just once said he 就一次 他说
it's fun said she 听起来不错 她说
may i touch said he 让我感受你好吗?
how much said she 多深入?她问
a lot said he 很深很深 他说
why not said she 那你还不来 她说
let's go said he 我们放手开始?
not too far said she 别太张扬 她说
what's too far said he 怎样算张扬?
where you are said she像你这样 她说
may i stay said he 这样可以吗?
which way said she什么样?
like this said he像这样
if you kiss said she只要你吻我
may i move said he 我想进一步
is it love said she 这是爱吗?她说
if you're willing said he只要你愿意
but you're killing said she你在引诱我
but it's life said he这就是生活
but your wife said she但你的妻子。。。。
now said he现在我不管
ow said she Oh 她呻吟
tiptop said he 太美好了他耳语
don't stop said she别停下 她说
oh no said he 忍不住了
go slow said she忍住 她说
cccome?said he 来来来来了
ummm said she 舒服 她呻吟
you're divine!said he 你是我的女神 他说
you are mine said she你属于我 她说
念起来又优美又有韵律,虽然是用很简单的句子,可是画面感和故事感都很强。这样的文章,有血有肉,有声音的律动和故事的折转,因此性感,但不低俗。