介绍:
主播：Jerry I翩翩
配乐： Wonderful world----Sam Cooke
Today’s topic:How to make a sentence better?
Rule 1：使用形容词和副词！
She sing
→(Beautiful )Mary sings (happily).
*给she一个名字，并选一个形容词描述she；
*给动词加副词，描述怎样唱。
Rule2：Add details 加细节
怎么加“细节”？超简单——— 5w1h 原则！
5W=who ,what ,when ,where, why
1H=how
Beautiful Mary sings happily.
→(During midnight),beautiful Mary sings happily (in the magic forest)( to wake the scary dragon).
在午夜时分，美丽的Mary在魔法森林里开心地唱歌，想要唤醒可怕的龙。
3.Change weak words to stronger words 将弱势词变为强有力的词
使用stronger words能直接呈现出一个scene（场景）。
Practice：
①Nena goes to school.
(Grumpy ) Nena，(an eight old years girl),(unfortunately )goes to (a private) school (through a bus)( every day).
②Jerry teaches.
(Every Saturday ) (muscular) Jerry ( passionately ) educates (English ) (at ASeat) ( to 3rd grade students) ( because he enjoys being with kids).
Homework
你英语老师喊你做作业啦！
使用改写句子的3条黄金法则，请给下面这个句子化化妆，使其变成一个熠熠生辉的句子。
I go to the park.
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